Post by thexan on Dec 14, 2015 15:14:01 GMT
I think this is a very good fantasy roleplaying forum, but after spending years of roleplaying on other forums, I think we can improve this. I'm not saying that I don't respect the hard works of everyone who have contributed in building this forum long before I came, this is only a suggestion.
First of all, more details should be applied. The site information is indeed already clear, but its the first thing people will see and therefore it needs to be more unique and interesting, in order to persuade more people to join us. Here is a sample I made, take note this is only a suggestion:
Second, the kingdoms. There is a lack of detailed explanation of the kingdoms, for example, it is not stated in the information the capital of Vuoria. I suggest you should include these followings in an explanation of a kingdom: name, capital, race majority, and brief history/description. It will be better too if you include further explanations regarding other locations in the kingdoms, such as Castle Nemus. And by the way, I have various unused descriptions of kingdoms and worlds which I planned to used in a roleplay, though I think I won't be able to do such thing and I can offer you a hand in explaining these kingdoms more further.
Third, the races. Believe me, they are absolutely interesting! What is lack there is a statement on when a person reach maturity in a race, except for humans since we know already know when will humans reach maturity.
Fourth, the site's header. I'm not saying its bad, its not. However, I can offer you some graphic designing assistance if you need one. Here are some concepts that I made:
There are other things that I might add, but for now, this is my suggestion! Take note that this RP has a brilliant plot. I'm not trying to be rude or disrespectful here, I only want to help, and thats all. Well, I can understand if you think I am annoying or some sort for doing this, but I thought its "Please post within this board if you have any questions or concerns about the site. Guest-friendly." , so I'm only speaking out my opinion. And again, I'm only trying to help here.
First of all, more details should be applied. The site information is indeed already clear, but its the first thing people will see and therefore it needs to be more unique and interesting, in order to persuade more people to join us. Here is a sample I made, take note this is only a suggestion:
CURRENT SITE INFO
There are three Kingdoms in this fantasy world; Arcul, Ponterion and Vuoria. All three Kingdoms are lead by a separate royal family. Tensions between the three Kingdoms are almost always present. Whether they choose to ally or war against each other for more lands, the choice is yours. There are a multitude of species for you to choose from here on Comhcheilg, and there are stills lots of nobility spaces open.
MY VERSION OF SITE INFO
Comhcheilg— a mythical land of kings, queens, conquerors, and alike, where civilizations of different races live together. Divided into three kingdoms; Arcul, Ponterion and Vuoria, you must choose your side in this time of chaos and war. All of this will be played out in a brilliant roleplay the likes of which you have never seen. You must choose your side in this time of chaos and war, and be at the center of the story where your choices matter and impact outcomes. What would you do when all hope is lost? Will you stand and fight for the ones you love? Or flee for your life? Will you make allies, betray, or fight each other? The choice is all yours!
Second, the kingdoms. There is a lack of detailed explanation of the kingdoms, for example, it is not stated in the information the capital of Vuoria. I suggest you should include these followings in an explanation of a kingdom: name, capital, race majority, and brief history/description. It will be better too if you include further explanations regarding other locations in the kingdoms, such as Castle Nemus. And by the way, I have various unused descriptions of kingdoms and worlds which I planned to used in a roleplay, though I think I won't be able to do such thing and I can offer you a hand in explaining these kingdoms more further.
Third, the races. Believe me, they are absolutely interesting! What is lack there is a statement on when a person reach maturity in a race, except for humans since we know already know when will humans reach maturity.
Fourth, the site's header. I'm not saying its bad, its not. However, I can offer you some graphic designing assistance if you need one. Here are some concepts that I made:
Do you want guests and new members to feel the mysterious vibes of the plot?
Do you want guests and new members to feel the action vibes of the plot?
Do you want guests and new members to feel the desperation vibes of the plot?
There are other things that I might add, but for now, this is my suggestion! Take note that this RP has a brilliant plot. I'm not trying to be rude or disrespectful here, I only want to help, and thats all. Well, I can understand if you think I am annoying or some sort for doing this, but I thought its "Please post within this board if you have any questions or concerns about the site. Guest-friendly." , so I'm only speaking out my opinion. And again, I'm only trying to help here.